My aunt used to be known as the wild child of our family. When she was you she did have a job, but mostly cared about going out with her friends. Now as a mature woman she know how to balance her life. She has fun, but never forgets about the needs of her family. Her mom, my only grandma, moved back to Mexico and even though Marina's other sisters and brothers send my grandma money she feels it's her obligation to send her money as well. My aunt Marina is always thinking of my grandma. She recently had a $40 piercing done, so she felt it was only fair to send my grandma extra money. She knows my grandma doesn't work, so she tries to send as much money as she can. After my aunt knows she needs to take care of what is important before she can go out. Now, she wouldn't have it any other way.
My Future
13 years ago
Hi! : )
ReplyDeleteum so your last anecdote, i was a little confused. i got that the was caring and she wants her mom to be ok, but i didnt understand how the related to how wild she is... maybe you could re-word it so it will flow with the first sentence of the ¶. but all around it looks good. :)